Jenny is presented as the family anomaly. She's the dissenter. She's the only one who's really competent... But later on, her identity crisis is... totally not believable to me. The only character who is presented as the sane one and the competent one in the family is the one who ends up being the most immobilized. And I just felt like she deserved better.
It feels like Taffy knows the least about Jenny's job. Taffy clearly knows a lot about Beamer - that's why it's the longest section. And then maybe she does happen to know a lot about this land-use stuff and that makes it really interesting. But it really feels like she glosses over Jenny's character and job.
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